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What have you been drinking to write something like this…

I think this is also getting a lot more focused than the 1st chapter (excl. the news part; a bit of formatting could fix it from a list of text into a more message/RSS feed type of thing—but this is a Substack/editing issue and your hands are somewhat tied by the platform) or perhaps I’m warming to the subject.

Regardless, curious to see how this develops!

KelleyTauffel Fiction Shroom's avatar

Noooo Thibault. Pick the technical one! Aaah. I'm loving this so much. I had to stop reading for a second when Atlas wanted to fix things and decided he couldn't. I was getting upset.

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