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Logan Raith's avatar

WHAT is happening?!

Man, this was a freaking great addition to the series. Ink’s abilities expand into fun new territory. His ability to become Captain America at will, to take wounds from others that he shares with his twin sister (hopefully not against her will!), and a smoking hot grandma.

My skin did start to crawl right after she shows she’s pantiless, says he needs to “give us a kiss,” and is then revealed to be his grandmother!!! Dude 🤦 what a bizarre family.

Oh, the “I use Grok” line is hilarious 🤣

Great stuff, man.

Jay Allen Ford's avatar

David, I think what impressed me most here is how much character you manage to reveal while everything is moving.

Cass is funny and cocky, but then the healing scene with Angelique suddenly shows us the cost underneath the swagger. And Angelique may have taken a brick to the head, but somehow she still manages to come out of the scene feeling like the dangerous one. 😂

Their banter makes their relationship feel lived-in rather than explained, which I really enjoyed.

And then, after all that menace and seduction at the end, you hit us with:

“Why exactly are you here, Grandmother?”

That got me. 😂

Terrific ending, David. You definitely know how to make a reader turn the page.

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