“Dearest, there is vulnerability in the moment of birth, and there are Artists who can reach back and harvest you if they know the exact time and place.” Holy smack, badass.
I was going to skip commenting, but I just can't. This is... wow. Epic.
Let me go grab a few favorite lines, lol.
“Why is there a crotchless lingerie goblin sitting in your kitchen, Cass?” LOL
“Yes, yes...I swear on that silly book of fables he carries.” (MY FAV)
Mathild answers for me. “Tiny fish. Barely a morsel. Something you’d put on a cracker.” I had to laugh quietly, and it was hard, lol.
There are so many more!!
I love how you outdo yourself every single time you post a new article/chapter. This new stuff? Fantasticle, worldbuilding and lore and cool things galore. It def hits the spot. And the ending?? Yep, I'm heading that way right this moment.
But, I almost forgot... the imagery in this? PERFECT.
Yeah I am feeling bad about shocking people with the Mathild reveal at the end of #3. But having Ink say “What are doing here great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandma loses some of the impact.
Thanks for reading this man. I’m excited to see how you in particular like the combat scene in #5.
This is super enjoyable read. I have Write's club chat passing by on the right as I write this, so I can't give much thoguht to the comment, but it is very well done. All characters are unique and have distinct voice. I'm intrigued and it points towards a bigger lore of Art. Nicely done.
“Dearest, there is vulnerability in the moment of birth, and there are Artists who can reach back and harvest you if they know the exact time and place.” Holy smack, badass.
I was going to skip commenting, but I just can't. This is... wow. Epic.
Let me go grab a few favorite lines, lol.
“Why is there a crotchless lingerie goblin sitting in your kitchen, Cass?” LOL
“Yes, yes...I swear on that silly book of fables he carries.” (MY FAV)
Mathild answers for me. “Tiny fish. Barely a morsel. Something you’d put on a cracker.” I had to laugh quietly, and it was hard, lol.
There are so many more!!
I love how you outdo yourself every single time you post a new article/chapter. This new stuff? Fantasticle, worldbuilding and lore and cool things galore. It def hits the spot. And the ending?? Yep, I'm heading that way right this moment.
But, I almost forgot... the imagery in this? PERFECT.
Thank you Eris. That means so much to me.
Great job introducing so much lore AND keeping the story moving forward. Fun stuff, David.
Thank you terence.
Hell yeah. This is heating up!
And I’m so happy that Mathild’s not an immediate relative. LOL.
David, these get better with each chapter. It’s going to be a bestseller one day. No joke.
Yeah I am feeling bad about shocking people with the Mathild reveal at the end of #3. But having Ink say “What are doing here great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandma loses some of the impact.
Thanks for reading this man. I’m excited to see how you in particular like the combat scene in #5.
This is super enjoyable read. I have Write's club chat passing by on the right as I write this, so I can't give much thoguht to the comment, but it is very well done. All characters are unique and have distinct voice. I'm intrigued and it points towards a bigger lore of Art. Nicely done.
Mathild is such an amazing character. Hope she makes more appearances later in the story.
Mathild is a major character throughout Arc One. So you’ll get more of her soon.