The layout is different every time I come over. Mismatched chair beds and squat wooden sleeper benches crowd the living room. There are stools around an island in the kitchen and a dining room table with more chairs. Both of the smallish bedrooms have two futons that convert into seating when not in use.”<--This bit makes me feel so close to the character, and I cannot quite pin my finger on why that is. The personal space, maybe. Plus, I already love the character so this just adds onto the character building for me.
I also want to hit something, I guess coffee will have to do. Loved loved loved that. 1st the note and then him feeling the same why? True love, hehehe.
When he and Vivian are going on about him being beautiful I was cheesing so hard.
And oh snap! I really need some visuals of these ‘cloud hands.’ I pictured that perfectly. 👌
Who the hell is this Gardener… damn. 👀
And all throughout is that beat of coffee, punching things, and resisting that touch.
The layout is different every time I come over. Mismatched chair beds and squat wooden sleeper benches crowd the living room. There are stools around an island in the kitchen and a dining room table with more chairs. Both of the smallish bedrooms have two futons that convert into seating when not in use.”<--This bit makes me feel so close to the character, and I cannot quite pin my finger on why that is. The personal space, maybe. Plus, I already love the character so this just adds onto the character building for me.
I also want to hit something, I guess coffee will have to do. Loved loved loved that. 1st the note and then him feeling the same why? True love, hehehe.
When he and Vivian are going on about him being beautiful I was cheesing so hard.
And oh snap! I really need some visuals of these ‘cloud hands.’ I pictured that perfectly. 👌
Who the hell is this Gardener… damn. 👀
And all throughout is that beat of coffee, punching things, and resisting that touch.
Fudging loved this one.
Thank you Eris. I was concerned that the Taijiquan sequence was too much. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I read half of this yesterday, but I won’t comment until I have typed it up in Google Docs while I read it again.