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DC Trull's avatar

Yea, though I walk through the valley...

It makes sense that a code would be attached. I look forward to more on this character.

DC Trull's avatar

I very much enjoyed this story. Your protagonist is actually far more "clean" than he gives himself credit for being.

All of life is transactional--for a reason.

What you've got versus what you need weighted against the same haves/needs for others.

I love a fair trade. The win-win, if you will.

David T Etheredge's avatar

Ink has a code - its the only way he can cope with his power. But soon, events will occur that will test that code...

Thorn's avatar

Ohh, this is so good! Love it. Thank you!

David T Etheredge's avatar

Thank you! :)

Martin Maenza's avatar

David, I like a good tale of temptations and consequences. This has started strong. Good job.

David T Etheredge's avatar

Thank you Martin. Temptations and consequences. Yeah, that lands.

MEGAN MARROW's avatar

Oh, I am here for this! Bravo, David! I’m completely drawn in.

David T Etheredge's avatar

Excited to hear what you think Megan! :)